Teacher Told Me (work in progress)

I reveled in the challenge

of expression

to make sense of things

and perhaps along the way,

start to discover the truth –

of us here,

to finally connect.

 

You gave me a B

and wrote on top –

“use less” of I

and

“forgot to add” the

but overall good

“keep writing”

 

Here is a “belated” reply;

love you

and

the truth will set us free.

 

It is different for you

then it is for me.

Let us connect these two pieces

and see what we else we can be.

 

 

 

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